Here's my new poem for your consideration and critique. Thanks...?

wow. i really love your poem. it is so deep and... not in that creepy way, it's just really great. i read it and felt... i could really feel the poem, like it had a living a nd breathing body, soul? it sounds kind of weird.... and you are probably thinking by now I'm stramge as well. but, really what I'm trying to say is, your poem is amazing. it is beautiful. i would definitely love to see more of yours! lovely!=] --Sarah--